was going to say I like "nexit" as well, nice blending there.
the first half could be read by an electronic voice, which gradually changes
to a human voice that reads the more worded last half.
the racing tempo here, mainly the lack of punctuation, builds up to the
punchline-like last line of the peeping-poet, haw.
liking this.
2009/9/3 Angel Marquez <[log in to unmask]>
> Relentless foresight
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> Constrains options
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> Serious solution
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> Must be set in motion
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> Without showing signs
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> Of existence
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> System built to appear pleasant
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> Exploit
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> Recognized
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> Safety alarmed
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> Game on
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> Resist
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> Be prepared to accept
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> Criminal
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> genius
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> foolish
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> equal
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> To play means to be turned, to win means to play
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> sacrifice
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> .failure
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> learn from this
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> nexit
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> lights dim and the floor boards creak as the naked cellist poses for me
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> head down
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> naked shoulders and knees create points of the rhombus center of the
> panoramic photo to be
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> the freckles on the shoulders are what do it for me
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> the unlearned beauty of the sound the bow makes when hitting the strings
> makes me think
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> I should have brought a higher ladder
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> next time
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