to me this feels like it's standing on one leg without some music+vocals to
go with it. do you primarily write song lyrics?
these verses feel pretty banal to me, even heavy-handed; they don't really
say anything substantial because they're so generalised, or hackneyed
really. to make these sentiments subtle would be to make it poetry.
2009/9/1 Angel Marquez <[log in to unmask]>
> You're always sayingYou're with some other guy
>
> You're always playing
> On, the other side
>
> It makes me crazy
> It drives me insane
>
> but
>
> I know you know it makes it right
> I know you know it makes it right
>
> You're always faking
> Everybody out
>
> You're always taking
> The most dangerous route
>
> It keeps me in line
> It puts me in check
>
> but
>
> I know you know it makes it right
> I know you know it just aint right
>
> You make me so high
> You make me so high
>
> You're always twisting
> The truth, inside out
>
> You're always breaking
> More than all the rules
>
> You think you're so cool
> It drives me wild
>
> but
>
> I know you know it makes it right
> I know you know, you know, you know
>
> You make me so high
> You make me sooooo
>
> high
>
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