Janet, you've kicked up my curiosity with your subtle "I find it interesting
that you never doubt." Would it be too intrusive to ask why you ask that?
I tend often to interpret poems as I interpret dreams, gently and thoroly
seeking what the writer was feeling, what the symbols are telling the
writer.
Best,
Judy
2008/11/9 Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
> Thanks Judy.
> I find it interesting that you never doubt.
> I wonder how others interpret the poem or respond to it.
>
> Janet
>
> 2008/11/9 Judy Prince <[log in to unmask]>
>
> > This is lovely, Janet. Each line a shelf, a ledge for our flight. Enuff
> > on
> > those ledges for our understanding 'where' we're about to fly. And quite
> > the romance, after all. We never once doubt that it'll be a duo, not a
> > solo, flight.
> > Judy
> >
> > 2008/11/8 Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
> >
> > > Not sure whether this works. Probably been done before anyway.
> > >
> > > *With a series of txts we.*
> > > 2008
> > >
> > > With a series of txts we.
> > > I take wine.
> > > We share a plate of
> > > The light dim, the candle
> > > talk poetry anarchy
> > > & how not to
> > > & how bad my
> > > & how clumsy
> > > & how we hate mornings
> > >
> > > We move outside so he
> > > take our
> > > I up
> > > I stare at try to look
> > > because of his
> > > &
> > > staring to one side when he talks
> > > His eyelashes are dark & delicate
> > > His hair is trashed
> > > His pencil-sharp knife-free nose,
> > > longline chin marred by unshaven
> > >
> > > He isn't well, I should let
> > > But he a cigarette
> > > & txts some
> > > his fingers so long, so soft
> > >
> > > *Janet*
> > > --
> > > I'm looking for writing-related paid work! Performance (my poetry,
> yours
> > or
> > > someone else's); any kind of writing including technical or corporate;
> > > ghostwriting; editing; teaching creative writing, poetry or
> performance;
> > > selling books; literary administration... whatever. All leads
> > appreciated.
> > >
> > > Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
> > > www.proximitypoetry.com (Poetry)
> > > www.myspace.com/poetjj (Includes occasional arts & culture blog)
> > >
> > > The Line Mine, bulletin board for Perth poetry & spoken word:
> > > [log in to unmask]
> > > groups.yahoo.com/group/thelinemine
> > >
> > > Breastfeeding info & help: www.breastfeeding.asn.au
> > >
> >
>
>
>
> --
> I'm looking for writing-related paid work! Performance (my poetry, yours or
> someone else's); any kind of writing including technical or corporate;
> ghostwriting; editing; teaching creative writing, poetry or performance;
> selling books; literary administration... whatever. All leads appreciated.
>
> Janet Jackson <[log in to unmask]>
> www.proximitypoetry.com (Poetry)
> www.myspace.com/poetjj (Includes occasional arts & culture blog)
>
> The Line Mine, bulletin board for Perth poetry & spoken word:
> [log in to unmask]
> groups.yahoo.com/group/thelinemine
>
> Breastfeeding info & help: www.breastfeeding.asn.au
>
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