I think the answer is 'very apt' Patrick.
That comments on this list can be made into Patrick style poems. I
hope your household god is happy with our offerings.
2008/5/26 Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>:
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> Behalf Of David Bircumshaw
> Sent: 26 May 2008 11:53
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> Subject: Re: New beats (???)
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> I like the rhyme of 'loads' and 'Olds' Judy.
>
> It reads like something by Patrick!
>
> Best
>
> Dave
> Is that good or very very bad????:-)
> P
> VB will scan your reply -he has just dragged in another mammoth I don't
> where he gets to P
>
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David Bircumshaw
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