thanks very much everyone!
drone was a copoutish thing, the opening line is just an alliterative
trip I got in my head (which the rest of the poem came from..). I
meant more like sigh or whisper or ANY kind of sound really. it's an
edit waiting to happen.
'struck' is a little nondescript, & I'm also not certain about 'scene'.
thnks
KS
2008/5/11 Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>:
> Hi Kasper I am not quite sure what drone means here (silly old duffer) is it
> an insect drone -or an observer thing
> Cheers unka P
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> Subject: just a snap
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> I know it's nowhere near wednesday, but I almost never SNAP so now
> that I have I thought I'd share.
> http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dfr8jjpv_72q38xmwr3
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> KS
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