A sharp view, Dave. Do you need the 'is' (written 'its') in the final
line?
Doug
On 30-Apr-08, at 1:55 AM, David Bircumshaw wrote:
> Yours
> "this they call the doctrine of the shattered vessels"
Douglas Barbour
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