how do you mean, a triple space?
J
On 16/01/2008, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Hey, even a triple space. The single period does stand out, which is
> why I mentioned it....
>
> Doug
> On 14-Jan-08, at 10:11 PM, Janet Jackson wrote:
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> > On 15/01/2008, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> >> I still like it, Janet.
> >>
> >> But no period after the 'your' in st 3?
> >
> >
> > I wanted a pause there. A stanza break might be better.
> >
> > & what about 'your' as the
> >> final word?
> >
> >
> > Instead of 'you'? that had occurred to me, too
> >
> > Thanks
> > J
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