onomatopoeic somehow, or at least highly descriptive for me
KS
On 10/01/2008, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> very good, perfectly aural. I love the word 'humming', it's so onomatopoeic.
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> KS
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> On 09/01/2008, sharon brogan <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > Whisper
> >
> > Listen. It's a new moon night. There is no light to be heard
> > falling on fresh snow. Snow drifting down so quietly you hear
> > nothing. Listen. Distant electric humming under the evening
> > silence. A fountain trickles beneath the ice. Far away, geese
> > call to one another across the slow river. Listen harder. Do you
> > hear it? The crackling of stars, colliding starlight, high, higher,
> > in the dimming, snow-speckled night. That hiss. That whisper.
> >
> > --
> >
> >
> > ~ SB | http://www.sbpoet.com | =^..^=
> >
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