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From: "andrew burke" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Thursday, June 07, 2007 7:45 PM
Subject: Re: "The Sense of a Journey"
Fred - I'll go back to this poem again and again, Fred, because on the
first reading it says a lot of things that echo in me and it says them
in a style I can equate to. Thanks for posting it.
Androo
Andrew, this is very heartening to hear. You might if you have a chance b/c
me about what exactly echoes in the poem. I like and need this kind of
feedback. I hope you have read the revised version. Am kicking myself
about some of the solecisms in the original. - Best, Fred
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