I will b/c, but just now I have to go and do amazing errands which I
won;t bore you with. They are amazingly 'Chinese' - getting through
parts of the system just to leave >g< Ho-hum.
Androo
On 08/06/07, Frederick Pollack <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "andrew burke" <[log in to unmask]>
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Thursday, June 07, 2007 7:45 PM
> Subject: Re: "The Sense of a Journey"
>
>
> Fred - I'll go back to this poem again and again, Fred, because on the
> first reading it says a lot of things that echo in me and it says them
> in a style I can equate to. Thanks for posting it.
>
> Androo
>
> Andrew, this is very heartening to hear. You might if you have a chance b/c
> me about what exactly echoes in the poem. I like and need this kind of
> feedback. I hope you have read the revised version. Am kicking myself
> about some of the solecisms in the original. - Best, Fred
>
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