i know why you're confused, Andrew... the alphabet in China is a whole lot
different...
--
Bob Marcacci
I do not seek, I find.
- Pablo Picasso
> From: andrew burke <[log in to unmask]>
> Reply-To: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" <[log in to unmask]>
> Date: Fri, 4 May 2007 19:59:20 +0800
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Subject: Re: starpoem
>
> I'm sorry to say I'm lost entirely, although I do like the first three
> lines, other than 'clinks' - it seems inaccurate here. I am always
> frustrated by not being able to gain access to a poem: I feel it is
> all my fault. Give me a hand here, Kasper - what's up?
>
> Androo
>
> On 04/05/07, kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> "cassiopeia"
>>
>> Water sang in the sky as if in a cave,
>> Wet beads on godskin pulsing to sugar:
>> While spring strains, this ceremony clinks.
>> We don't pretend our eyes to have maps, & a
>> Waning evening grows old in three hundred nights.
>> Witch: you flower-eyed sorceress: each new look, the
>> World reconjures your face.
>>
>> KS
>>
>
>
> --
> Andrew
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