Bob, myself. is it not common to post poetry on a poetry list?
clunkiness/clinkiness noted. this is a first version.
Andrew, not sure how to help you.. I intended the poem to be fairly
straightforward.
KS
On 04/05/07, Bob Marcacci <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> what are you quoting?
>
> --
> Bob Marcacci
>
> The influence of each human being on others in this
> life is a kind of immortality.
> - John Quincy Adams
>
>
>
> > From: kasper salonen <[log in to unmask]>
> > Reply-To: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" <[log in to unmask]>
> > Date: Fri, 4 May 2007 13:03:44 +0300
> > To: <[log in to unmask]>
> > Subject: starpoem
> >
> > "cassiopeia"
> >
> > Water sang in the sky as if in a cave,
> > Wet beads on godskin pulsing to sugar:
> > While spring strains, this ceremony clinks.
> > We don't pretend our eyes to have maps, & a
> > Waning evening grows old in three hundred nights.
> > Witch: you flower-eyed sorceress: each new look, the
> > World reconjures your face.
> >
> > KS
>
|