Doug - thank you kindly.
Tina
>From: Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics" <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: SNAP Bass - alternative spacing
>Date: Thu, 10 May 2007 09:16:29 -0600
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>yeah, the spaces work for it. & the 'aloud' allows for so much...
>
>Doug
>On 9-May-07, at 11:33 AM, Tina Bass wrote:
>
>>For some reason, as soon as I had sent it, I wanted to change it. I think
>>this works better?
>>
>>
>>
>>ripe from dreaming
>>asks: why does the wind?
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>>he is aloud
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>>unused to static
>>listening moves to words
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>>stretching the true
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>>mist rusting brain
>>facts – not sated – swollen like pigeons
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