For some reason, as soon as I had sent it, I wanted to change it. I think
this works better?
ripe from dreaming
asks: why does the wind?
he is aloud
unused to static
listening moves to words
stretching the true
mist rusting brain
facts – not sated – swollen like pigeons
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