Cheers Doug
I started off trying to say something about the war(s) but I was
side-tracked into elegy. Final iteration coming up.
Roger
On 4/26/07, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Can we expect this third iteration to be it, for the moment, Roger?
>
> I was about to say something about the first one, as the others
> appeared....
>
> Which is to say I don't quite get all of it, but I did follow along,
> enjoying the turns, the twists, the very short line breaks (cf Kasper
> on that: it is something that does mean to me, rhythm, movement).
>
> And the addition of
> >> undertow
> >> monochrome
> >> disjoint
>
> moves it further, along, out.... Useful to the ppem , in other words...
>
> Doug
>
> On 26-Apr-07, at 8:10 AM, Roger Day wrote:
>
> > On 4/26/07, Roger Day <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >> On 4/26/07, Roger Day <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >> > this morning's morning
> >> > certain certain
> >> > warrior
> >> > lithium containment vice
> >> > vice
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