This is interesting, for the way it cuts to these single word lines,
Roger, but I miss the opening lines of the earlier version, which seems
to me to have a greater range of mood & rhythm in the (very slightly)
longer lines intertwined...
Doug
On 26-Apr-07, at 1:27 PM, Roger Day wrote:
> On 4/26/07, Roger Day <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> On 4/26/07, Roger Day <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> > On 4/26/07, Roger Day <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> > > On 4/26/07, Roger Day <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>> > > > this morning
>> > > > damage
>> > > > suck
>> > > > and so
>> > > > grind
>> > > > bend
>> > > > repellant
>> > > > viscous
>> > > > sand
>> > > > rebarb
>> > > > scars
>> > > > calibrate
>> > > > abrade
>> > > > dogwood
>> > > > tally
>> > > > chestnut
>> > > > wild
>> > > > breath-less
>> > > > blood
>> > > > flow
>> > > > vaginal
>> > > > blood
>> > > > flow
>> > > >streams
>> > > > estaurial
>> > > > sand-banks
>> > > >sand-grains
>> > > > flood
>> > > > wake
>> > > >bob
>> > >> undertow
>> > >> monochrome
>> > >> disjoint
>> > > > amniotic
>> > > > surf
>> > > > receive
>>
>>
>>
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>> "Patriotism is a virtue of the vicious." Oscar Wilde
>>
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>
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> My Stuff: http://www.badstep.net/
> "Patriotism is a virtue of the vicious." Oscar Wilde
>
>
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