Thanks all for your feedback. I feel a bit of a sham, of the 'I'm only
the messenger' variety. I had nothing to say but it was Snap day, so I
simply wrote down what was happening: the washing machine was whirling
to a stop. Then, a crazy thought entered my head ... so I wrote it
down ... followed by another ... Then I thought, 'I see what's
happening', so my consciousness took over and I wrote the last tlittle
verse.
And, Doug, as per usual, you're absolutely right about those two
lines. I will amend in my diary draft, which will eventually find it's
way over to the China Poetry file.
Androo
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