Thanks Candice - I think, after a year of beginning to write again, that
it's beginning to move in the direction I want - largely due to
encouragement/criticism/education from the wonderful participants on
this list.
Caleb
-----Original Message-----
From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of MC Ward
Sent: Wednesday, 14 March 2007 4:10 AM
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Subject: Caleb's poem
What a gorgeous poem, Caleb! Very well crafted and the
images have real staying power. I also admire the
subtle use of rhyme--never calling attention to
itself, but all the while connecting one stanza to the
next.
It's also very beautiful.
Candice
Let's let love give
What it gives
(Bruce Springstein)
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