Sharon I like this but doesn't a chrysanthemum open of it's own accord sort
of magical slowly (I used magical before here someone went bananas
Would it not then be----'let it open'
Cheeries P
Ps waiting for a bloody compueter delivery for Janet(when will they ever
come -to misquote
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Sent: 22 November 2006 19:36
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Subject: snapshot 22 november 02006
i wish i could hold
your heart in my hand
open it
like a chrysanthemum
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this is a sort-of haiga, here:
http://www.sbpoet.com/2006/11/snapshot_poem_2.html
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