Lawrence,
The end of this poem is so concentrated and harsh somehow after such a plain
and matter-of-fact beginning. I can still feel the pain of the sunlight in
my eyes.
I also don't know how on earth you get away with using 'widdershin' but you
certainly do.
Thank you
Tina
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From: "Lawrence Upton" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Wednesday, May 03, 2006 6:58 PM
Subject: SNAP
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