Lawrence, The end of this poem is so concentrated and harsh somehow after such a plain and matter-of-fact beginning. I can still feel the pain of the sunlight in my eyes. I also don't know how on earth you get away with using 'widdershin' but you certainly do. Thank you Tina ----- Original Message ----- From: "Lawrence Upton" <[log in to unmask]> To: <[log in to unmask]> Sent: Wednesday, May 03, 2006 6:58 PM Subject: SNAP