Thanks Mike.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 04/01/2005 11:03:11 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< > Hello Ryfkah,
I think this is a wonderful poem. The only suggestion IŽd make
is perhaps to interrogate the phrase `a bittersweet bubbleŽ. I donŽt think
IŽd use it, but that might be just me.
Best wishes, Mike >>
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