Thanks Gary, I might just go with your suggestions!
Bob
>From: Gary Blankenship <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: The Acrobat's Future
>Date: Wed, 5 Jan 2005 07:19:38 -0800
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>Bob, a thought for the start.
>
>I'll let your neck stretch and your eyes
>look up to the floor so close to your hair (cut up)
>and like when distant explosions announced (instead - when distant
>explosions announce
>that everything we've known will change
>I'll turn your world upside down.
>
>My fav, the last 2 lines of S4.
>
>Thanks.
>
>Gary
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