I too find this lovely & very suggestive - for instance "street-torn
waves" following a hiatus after "careless radio".
mj
Jill Jones wrote:
> after the weight
> of eleven dreams
> there's the dog shadow
>
> in morning columns
> noise is booming
> careless radio
>
> street-torn waves
> writing that lifts words
> busy empty pages
>
> remember
> the tunnel
> night has made
>
>
>
> Jill Jones
> Marrickville 19 January 2004
>
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