Ah keep warm Douglas!
And yes, a good snap,
Anny Ballardini
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The aim of the poet is to awaken emotions in the soul, not to gather
admirers.
Stalker, Andrei Tarkovsky
----- Original Message -----
From: "Douglas Barbour" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Friday, January 14, 2005 4:22 PM
Subject: Re: Snap at minus 30 C
A day or two later, Barry, but thanks. It was +19 in Toronto yesterday,
but apparently a cold wind is blowing in. Here it's still minus 28,
windchill minus 38 -- that's Centigrade.
Doug
On 12-Jan-05, at 8:03 PM, Barry Alpert wrote:
> Doug, I like a number of aspects of your snap. The spatialization,
> the
> coloration, and that unexpected (and effective) linebreak:
>
> above god / s pared fingernail
>
>
> It's supposed to reach 66 F here tomorrow. Barry
>
>
Douglas Barbour
Department of English
University of Alberta
Edmonton Alberta T6G 2E5 Canada
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The poet is ecstatic, having dreamt of this visit for weeks.
He takes Erato’s face, dribbling and wild, between his hands
and kisses her gently as if she were a runaway teenager.
Diana Hartog
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