Thanks Janet. My poetry mentor says I need to make the last line hummm . . .
On Mon, 21 Feb 2005 22:35:52 +0800, Janet Jackson
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> > If not for this list and the snapshot project, I would have few poems
> > of any kind. Today one caught me, as used to happen sometimes, and I
> > had (took) the energy to finish a first draft.
>
> Well Sharon I hope more of these come your way, because it's lovely.
> My favourite bit:
>
> > Yes. I am saying No. I am painting
> > this room the color of your eyes.
>
> Perhaps you could try standing in the path of poems more often.
> And get your poet self to tell your, what-was-it, quotidian self
> to take a break :-)
>
> Janet
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Sharon Brogan
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