See what Andrew's comments have done for me.
I think it's a much better poem now.
The subject matter really needs the compressed language.
Ripped
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I CARE FOR NOBODY
says the shirt.
$60. 10 identical. 600 blankstare dollars.
Fucked, ripped, empty 2005.
1976 shirts said CRASS or ANARCHY.
Ripped - but not in Chinese sweatshops.
Who cares for nobody?
The corporation.
"Anger is an energy"
If I can't have love give me hate.
Janet
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Janet Jackson
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