Yeah, in a way it 'worked' for me, & I liked the last stanza,
especially, but patly because the 'I' only appeared there, not
before...
Doug
On 19-Feb-05, at 8:00 AM, Janet Jackson wrote:
> Does this work for anyone? (Yes or No will do, but I really would
> like to know!)
>
> Ripped
> ------
>
> I CARE FOR NOBODY
> said the shirt.
> Fucked, ripped, empty.
> $60 of emotionless 2005 neopunk.
> 10 of them identical. That's
> 600 blankstare dollars.
>
> 1976 punk said CRASS
> or ANARCHY. And if your
> shirt was ripped, it wasn't ripped
> in a Chinese sweatshop.
>
> Who cares for nobody?
> The corporation.
>
> "Anger is an energy"
>
> If I can't have love give me hate.
>
> I bought jeans. Hot red,
> flared, textured, labelled
> PERVERT
>
> Janet
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> Janet Jackson
> <[log in to unmask]>
> www.arach.net.au/~huxtable/janet
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>
>
Douglas Barbour
Department of English
University of Alberta
Edmonton Alberta T6G 2E5 Canada
(780) 436 3320
http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/dbhome.htm
Reserved books. Reserved land. Reserved flight.
And still property is theft.
Phyllis Webb
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