Jon Corelis wrote:
>I liked David Bircumshaw's actual poem, but I'd cut out the patch
Ring-a-ling-ding.
('s baby talk) Seeds
and go right into the dandelion seeds.<
Thanks Jon. As it happens that patch was added at the last moments, except
for the final word, and I have wondered whether the joints show.
Best
Dave
David Bircumshaw
Leicester, England
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