on 29/7/01 5:09 PM, Erminia H. Passannanti at [log in to unmask] wrote:
Erminia,
Thanks for persevering with English for this poem. Sustained and moving.
Especially loved the first stanza and this: I remember leaving her seated in
hushed solitude/ in a beautiful garden/ wearing her blue flowery housedress/
still capable of defending her pockets/ with the brave determination of an
orphan. But all of it lovely.
Best,
Jill
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Marrickville NSW 2204
AUSTRALIA
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