Dear Sheenagh - I liked your poem. I believe everything in a poem is true
in its own environment: I don't doubt a word because it doesn't matter if
it was 'real' or not before: the poem makes it real. & who could make up
such a thing? It is a good ending, absolutely credible. In my honest
opinion ...
G'night.
Andrew
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