erminia, behave yourself. Period.
dave
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From: erminia <[log in to unmask]>
To: david.bircumshaw <[log in to unmask]>; brit poets
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Sent: Tuesday, October 19, 1999 4:46 PM
Subject: Re: poetry? Innocence
> Dave wrote:
> > I just knew you were going to bring that in off the poetryetc, erminia.
> > You're obsexed!
> > dave
>
> Dearee me, dearee me, ending being so mis-understood.
> Ah, the eternal vice of interpretation!
> But, Dave, what did you read in this poems? You naughty mind!
> It is the water speaking, the "w-a-t-e-r", not me"!
> David@ Naughty.Bircumshaw.com
> (consider now in this new light the profund innocence of my poem...)
> Erminia
>
> > > (Diving II)
> > >
> > > "I want him to win ( me ) "
> > >
> > > 5 seconds and he disappears
> > > into my depths
> > > good entry fine push fresh
> > > he jumps off the platform very deep high
> > > after a single twist
> > > with such a balance moving through
> > > spaces of crowds of stillness
> > >
> > > wet muscles juvenile
> > > hips this one standing on his tips
> > > the arms stretched out hanging up in his perfected
> > > posture
> > > after the initial wobble
> > > clear entry
> > > oh,
> > > enter me
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > >
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