Dave wrote:
> I just knew you were going to bring that in off the poetryetc, erminia.
> You're obsexed!
> dave
Dearee me, dearee me, ending being so mis-understood.
Ah, the eternal vice of interpretation!
But, Dave, what did you read in this poems? You naughty mind!
It is the water speaking, the "w-a-t-e-r", not me"!
David@ Naughty.Bircumshaw.com
(consider now in this new light the profund innocence of my poem...)
Erminia
> > (Diving II)
> >
> > "I want him to win ( me ) "
> >
> > 5 seconds and he disappears
> > into my depths
> > good entry fine push fresh
> > he jumps off the platform very deep high
> > after a single twist
> > with such a balance moving through
> > spaces of crowds of stillness
> >
> > wet muscles juvenile
> > hips this one standing on his tips
> > the arms stretched out hanging up in his perfected
> > posture
> > after the initial wobble
> > clear entry
> > oh,
> > enter me
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
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