I like the tercets. Seems to give it a gentle rhythm. Andrew
On 5 December 2011 23:26, Dominic Fox <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Last attempt (and apologies if your mail reader makes them all look
> the same as each other...)
>
> for life together
> for yvonne, for lila
> for the end of time
>
> convivial as eight-
> part harmony's irradiant
> orange and blue-violet
>
> dazzling and abandoned
> as chords of resonance
> halo the strident
>
> moloch-faced brass statue
> suddenly overwhelmed with flowers
>
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Andrew
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