I find tis poem very moving upsetting tense painful
Old P crying
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Subject: Re: My slow snap - Bass (slight amendment)
> and when you say 'it's fine'
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> it's fine in the way that
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> all your decisions are fine
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> and I bow my head as you leave
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> when you say 'fine'
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> I repeat, 'fine' over and over
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> until my mantra
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> puts them together
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