A fan as always, Sharon.
Andrew
On 25/10/2007, Heather Taylor <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> I agree with Judy. I find that the shape of the poem makes me feel that
> the
> writer is getting more and more tired, that each word is a hardship and
> that
> makes the feeling of depression itself come out even stronger. And autumn
> fog was lovely...
>
> Heather
>
> PS For some reason this poem reminded me of the prairies - the flat, the
> blue - maybe I'm just homesick?
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Judy Prince [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> Sent: 25 October 2007 10:06
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: Snapshot Poem 24 Oct '07
>
> This is a jewel, Sharon, even its shape. I'd not thought it possible to
> create an elegant beauty in describing what is known as depression. Thank
> God that cognitive therapy has put the lie to depression's powerful
> illogic.
>
> Best,
>
> Judy
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "sharon brogan" <[log in to unmask]>
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Thursday, October 25, 2007 4:28 AM
> Subject: Snapshot Poem 24 Oct '07
>
>
> > interminable months of flatness
> > the borderless continent
> > of fatigue - compulsion
> > of blue - dreams
> > seep into days
> > like autumn
> > fog
> >
> > *************
> >
> >
> > --
> >
> >
> > ~ SB | http://www.sbpoet.com | =^..^=
> >
>
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Andrew
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