See what you mean, Doug. Glad line 2 snuck through. Feared it to be
redundant after 1.
Bill
On Thursday, October 29, 2015, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> I suspect we all know this, Bill.
>
> I felt the middle stanza just stuck there, & you could skip to th third
> (without the ‘But’)….
>
> Doug
> > On Oct 27, 2015, at 3:18 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]
> <javascript:;>> wrote:
> >
> > Where has it gone?
> > Where can it be?
> > Hovered for a minute,
> > held its ground,
> > then scarpered.
> >
> > Had it been retrieved
> > probably wouldn't have
> > looked much different
> > from tangible, battled-out
> > ones that ink hit.
> >
> > But its very elusiveness
> > enthrals, frustrates,
> > drives the demon
> > that seeks a resting,
> > punctuative point.
> >
> > bw
>
> Douglas Barbour
> [log in to unmask] <javascript:;>
>
> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2
> (UofAPress).
> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>
> Done in by creation itself.
>
> I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
> The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
> We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
>
> Robert Kroetsch.
>
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