Hi David,
Thanks.
Munches, that's cool. Guess they're bite-size stanzas. :-)
J
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Like that Jill. It munches.
:)
David
On 27 September 2017 at 08:05, Jill Jones wrote:
> Thanks, Bill.
>
> It's compressed, I grant. The oppressiveness of the current world.
> Glad something stayed with you.
>
> But 'snacks'?
>
> Cheers,
> Jill
>
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> Jill Jones
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>
> Latest book: Brink, Five Islands Press
> http://fiveislandspress.com/catalogue/brink-jill-jones
>
> ----- Original Message -----
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> Sent:Wed, 27 Sep 2017 05:17:57 +0000
> Subject:Re: Snap: This Week's Pour
>
> Deep, Jill. Avoid the sudden. It snacks. 'The little we shoulder' a
> phrase
> that stays with me.
>
> Bill
>
> On Wed, 27 Sep 2017 at 9:18 am, Jill Jones wrote:
>
> > This Week’s Pour
> >
> > The world pours
> > out over the
> > world which
> > pours out
> > further than
> >
> > As if a subscription
> > extended life
> > as levitation
> > or something obviously
> > visible
> >
> > As if we bring
> > the little we
> > shoulder as if
> > the sun sang on
> > something important
> >
> > A DJ surrounds
> > you with
> > ridiculous thinking
> > someone simply
> > wants to punch you out
> >
> > As if the ‘sudden’ is
> > the way life is
> > apparent, what grows
> > offspring
> > or exceptions
> >
> > A word prolongs
> > how it feels
> > and extends
> > same-same as a way
> > of working distinct
> >
> > Words, not as
> > rhymes but
> > unearthing
> > provenances
> > moving through gaps
> >
> > That is, imagine
> > refugees, storms, evidence
> > or all these relations
> > plucked as thought
> > via questions
> >
> >
> >
>
>
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