Thanks Sheila. & Bill. Yes, I want that space, Bill (& hope the sense of ‘the way’ is in there with the other…
Doug
On Aug 19, 2015, at 4:11 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> That final stanza comes out of nowhere, Doug and sets a reader back, to the beginning again and again. Is the extra spacing in line 8 deliberate and is the final word 'away'?
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> Bill
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>> On 20 Aug 2015, at 1:50 am, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> to say without saying
>> an ancient politics
>> when exile waited
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>> on every publication
>> as a possibility
>> silence not included
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>> those migrating geese
>> say their unruffled
>> flight a way
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>> Douglas Barbour
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>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2 (UofAPress).
>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
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>> Done in by creation itself.
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>> I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
>> The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
>> We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
>>
>> Robert Kroetsch.
>>
Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Done in by creation itself.
I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
Robert Kroetsch.
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