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Like this too, Doug. Wonder however whether opening line with its clever s's should remain. The singing is celebrated in the third and fourth lines. Could then begin on 'unafraid'.

Bill

> On 30 Jan 2014, at 3:23 am, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> songs sung with sangfroid
>     unafraid on so many barricades
> barring none from joining the chorus
>     he sang joy & justice for self & everyone
>           that freedom ring     a/rising
>                 continues
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