Something going on there, Chris: new place new words... I liked it... Doug On 2011-09-25, at 1:23 AM, Chris Jones wrote: > moving into a blue water paradise and living on a classic sailing yacht has me thinking new things... ala Kant, where reason is immanant critique of reason; can cliche critique cliche? As follows... > > > Paradise Rain > > Thunder and lightening last sleepless night > all Sunday wet with rain > > Extended forcast until october ten > more rain days > then sun > > > Drought, please return > as dolphins loop through > blue water paradise > > rain drops on a fibreglass deck > Douglas Barbour [log in to unmask] [log in to unmask] http://www.ualberta.ca/~dbarbour/ http://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/ Latest books: Continuations (with Sheila E Murphy) http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=664 Wednesdays' http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com/2008/03/new-from-aboveground-press_10.html Why poetry? And why not, I asked, my right brain humming sedition. Phyllis Webb