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Fair enough I think the stuff that's been dropped is implicit with that removed, you don't hammer the point and that tends to make the point more forcefully anyway over to you all best L On Tue, September 13, 2011 16:03, Patrick McManus wrote: > Thanks Lawrence -not sure myself about this yet cheers P -it may have > been Water off a ducks back to him?? > > > -----Original Message----- > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On > Behalf Of Lawrence Upton > Sent: 07 September 2011 10:36 > To: [log in to unmask] > Subject: Re: pat > snap-))))))))))))))))))))))))!)(((((((((((((((((((((((((((-Wednesday, 07 > September 2011 > > > Patrick > > > I think you don't need the last para > > > perhaps not his question > > Thus > > > * > > > PHOTO PROJECT > > > he woke up feeling lively! even say feeling dynamic! > > then a phone call > > 'would you like > to feature in a photo project?' > > 'the subject is > old people' > > * > > > > > > On Wed, September 7, 2011 08:41, Patrick McManus wrote: > >> PHOTO PROJECT >> >> >> >> he woke up feeling lively! even say feeling dynamic! >> >> then a phone call >> >> 'would you like >> to feature in a photo project?' >> >> 'the subject?' >> >> >> >> 'the subject is >> old people' >> >> suddenly he felt slightly less lively and less dynamic >> >> >> pmcmanus q901 yes this is autobiographical :-) >> > > > ----- > UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton > 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover > Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4 > wfuk.org.uk/blog ---- > Lawrence Upton > Dept of Music > Goldsmiths, University of London > > ----- UNFRAMED GRAPHICS by Lawrence Upton 42 pages; A5 paperback; colour cover Writers Forum 978 1 84254 277 4 wfuk.org.uk/blog ---- Lawrence Upton Dept of Music Goldsmiths, University of London