Not just what's left out, but the weight each word is asked to carry, Jill. I like it.
Doug
On 2011-05-25, at 8:53 PM, [log in to unmask] wrote:
> Aria da capo
>
> fixtures and rain
> fell to scatter
> dark mark paver
>
> fall drug cold
> but aria comes
> I am capable
>
> nothing halts tempo
> today cornered fell
> but arcs win
>
> ________________________
> Jill Jones
>
> www.jilljones.com.au
>
Douglas Barbour
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the poem, like the city, destroyed and built again
and, here and there, remains of history
Chus Pato (trans. Erin Mouré)
