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OK, Partick; if we must have our first quarrel in public, then let it be petc public. And the computer repairperson seems to've disappeared into the LA fog. Rats. So still with the uncapped 'h', 'd', and 'n'. Damn haiku and sonnets, man! In THIS poetic instance, I say that size IS [mostly] everything. You haven't truly TRIED to write MORE MORE MORE. So write MORE MORE MORE!!!!! U R Partick, capital wit, time-tested petc-snapper, but I think you're afraid to be a poet. Blast! Bloody hell! 2008/10/30 Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> > Moodles!!! More! What do you mean more would you have four line haiku 23 > line sonnets ??this is madness flogging dead horses > Size is not everything !!! > But well here's a longering! To appease whoever > > NAGGING > > when he > accused her > of nagging > she whinnied > stamped her hooves > and flicked her tail > at him provocatively > then bolted > > > pmcmanus > q341 > > -----Original Message----- > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On > Behalf Of Judy Prince > Sent: 30 October 2008 15:59 > To: [log in to unmask] > Subject: Re: FW: Pat Snap earlyish :~:#:~:Wodensday 29th Octoberrevision > > I love you, too, Partick; don't tell Janet! > > You stole a word from my poem and that's SO unforgiveable. > > But more important, as your editor I insist that you make this poem MORE! > MORE! > > Just what kind of more do I envision? Let me see: No, that's your job as > poet. An editor only has to give orders. > > Your absolutely most devoted fan who's trying to type this on 'my' Janet's > [son's wife] keyboard, the 'd', 'h', and 'n' which are missing, thanks to > the little 5 yr old buggers my grandtwins. OY. > > Please reply to me soon before I take this *&%$%$ pc to a repairperson! > > > > > > > > 2008/10/30 Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> > > > This seems better???? visions and revisions snap!! > > > > NAGGING > > > > when he > > accused her > > of nagging > > she whinnied > > stamped her hooves > > and flicked her tail > > provocatively > > > > > > pmcmanus > > q341 > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On > > Behalf Of Patrick McManus > > Sent: 28 October 2008 20:29 > > To: [log in to unmask] > > Subject: Pat Snap earlyish :~:#:~:Wodensday 29th October > > > > NAGGING > > > > when he > > accused her > > of nagging > > she whinnied > > stamped her hooves > > and flicked her tail > > at him provocatively > > > > > > pmcmanus > > q341 > > early -off to see grandorts in the morning > > have got old computer going again -new one downloaded nearly 6000 emails > > then died - didn't have this problems in caves Mammoth clubs you could > > rely > > on and a good old flint slashers did wonders -but those cavewomen chasing > > one with heavy clubs were a bit much > > P shattered > > >