Thanks again, Doug. Means a lot.
Bill
On 31/10/2013, at 8:58 AM, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> Ah, I think it's all in that mode & mood neatly now, Bill. A setting, so to speak...
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> Doug
> On Oct 30, 2013, at 3:39 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> Many thanks, John and Doug. Surprises me, John, that you would see universalities. But I suppose we only shift so far in the confines of an institution. Dead right as usual, Doug, I have tinkered below and it felt so right to do it. Macca remains as an exception to all that present participling and only on revising, did I notice the 'doubling' coming up three times which I have left.
>>
>> Regards,
>> Bill
>>
>> Slipping into belonging
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>> Being on the edge of change;
>> The Moon landing being slipped into British
>> History as an example of modern colonisation.
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>> Doing Geography projects in small groups,
>> presenting finished product on coloured A3 paper;
>> negotiating up from being responsible for The Heading.
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>> Trimming the bottom isosceles of our tan ties with scissors.
>> Ribbed long socks and pale yellow cotton girls' sports tunics;
>> Annette's wiry red hair and freckled arms clashing with all that paleness.
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>> Opting to sit longer at desks after The Bell for Rock Lunch Club, egg sangos
>> and fruitcake splayed from brown bags; Cocker Happy jaunting
>> on the school's stereo, wall-mounted Wharfedale speakers.
>>
>> Double desking with Felicity in Pure,
>> while chalked formulae accumulated on the smooth blackboard.
>> Waiting for her thigh to shift; the times she allowed nestle.
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>> Slinging my Malvern Star up, on frosty mornings by the front wheel,
>> it latching between spokes on the high hook in the Bike Shelter.
>> Mouse's bright red 500cc Suzuki squatting below its pedal cousins.
>>
>> Doubling as a dour Exam zone, Room 32, in its own isolated block,
>> being used as drama room; pretending to not care when my part
>> in a play was rotated to Jovan, who later died in a car accident.
>>
>> Noticing my hand being the only one up, responding
>> to a question about The Merchant of Venice, the penny
>> dropping: the maths/science elites really didn’t know.
>>
>> Writing maths solutions on the board with both hands at the same
>> time, Mrs Sikh, because she just found it efficient; casually smoking
>> Mr Bodley, insisting post-PE shower doors remain propped open.
>>
>> Catching, in The Breezeway, the word 'period', clearly not denoting
>> subject session, amid muffled laughter from behind cupped hands:
>> knowing there was stuff I didn't know and couldn't ask about.
>>
>> Tough Macca dropping dead after an inter-school footy game.
>> Guest speaker Danny Spooner singing 'The Famous Flower of Serving Men'
>> a cappella; the hush in the hall at the tale of portents and transformations.
>>
>> Collecting signatures on a petition for which I wrote the preamble,
>> proposing a Form Six student smoking room in the Physics lab; posting
>> it in the mail in a stamped envelope to squeaky-voiced Principal Perry.
>>
>> Being summoned to 'Head' office as number one signatory;
>> treated warily, even respectfully, by someone in power
>> for the first time. Permission denied; a watch put on me.
>>
>> Beatling his straight hair vertically over his forehead, Ned Wilson,
>> running the black comb teeth the full width of his head just above eye
>> level, never taking eyes off his image in the long mirror in the boys' toilet.
>>
>> Hearing instructions in French over the PA for a senior class;
>> ignoring other bulletins over the PA, not even knowing that
>> The Pirates of Penzance was a musical, for the whole of 1968.
>>
>> Failing woodwork in form two and my father a carpenter;
>> Pop Quizzes in Science trotted out by a rotund American;
>> matching terms with precise definitions his brainwave.
>>
>> Looking down on vulnerable teacher in steeply tiered Room 15,
>> designed for cooking demonstrations; ascending desks
>> perched on squeaky scaffolding-supported floorboards.
>>
>> The rumbling of pulled down continuous cloth ‘blackboards’
>> to expose virgin dark green - or remnants of unscrubbed lessons.
>> Yardstick rulers resting on the wall, outsized wooden protractors.
>>
>> Feeling woozy in metalwork room; each boy at lesson's end, standing
>> to attention by his vice, silent, stared down by grey dust-coated
>> Mr Mir's chocolate eyes above wiry black-grey moustache.
>>
>> Coming adrift, the seat of my wooden chair, it thwacking to the floor
>> as we inverted them in unison at day's end in Art, laughter;
>> accepted for the first time on the other side of the Yarra.
>>
>> bw
>> 31.10.13
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