not much of critical expertise here, except to say that i adored the
rhythms and delighted to the beautifully judged para-rhymed end-lines in
jon corelis's poem. which all sounds llike so much guff, i know, but
sometimes it's difficult just to say "i liked"
happy christmas to all
(especially bill griffiths & lawrence upton)
david bircumshaw
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