I missed acrostic! cheers thanks
& drift memory
sounds like me!
On 20/02/2019 22:45, Sheila Murphy wrote:
> Yes, so good with that acrostic nicely and neatly embedded. Thanks, Doug!
>
> On Wed, Feb 20, 2019 at 2:47 PM Barry Alpert <
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>> Doug,
>>
>> Gradually discovered the acrostic after noting the unusual 4/5/1/4
>> stanzaic pattern for a sonnet. A very strong "turn" from the end of the
>> 10th line to the beginning of the 11th.
>>
>> Barry
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>> On Wed, 20 Feb 2019 10:50:32 -0700, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
>> wrote:
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>>> meet the parents
>>> each time the same
>>> and different
>>> tell that to the kids
>>>
>>> body knows what body feels
>>> loss across the years
>>> ordinary people
>>> or not all learn
>>> dreams will falter
>>>
>>> & drift memory
>>>
>>> batters against stories
>>> organizing what realities
>>> no one can now recall
>>> each time we tell them again
>>>
>>>
>>> Douglas Barbour
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>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>
>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
>> 2 (UofAPress).
>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>> Listen. If (UofAPress):
>>>
>>> It was cold, in a way that Shadow was starting to become familiar with:
>> colder inside the building than out. He wondered how they did that, if it
>> was a British building secret.
>>> Neil Gaiman
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