That is an amazing confession and revelation, Doug. What happens with the
head down eh!
Bill
On Fri, 22 Feb 2019 at 5:16 am, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> It's called genius, Doug!
>
> On Thu, Feb 21, 2019, 10:01 AM Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
> > Thanks everyone. Barry, that’s a great notice; I missed the acrostic too;
> > it was something that happened without plan.
> >
> > Doug
> >
> > > On Feb 21, 2019, at 3:24 AM, Patrick McManus <
> > [log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > >
> > > I missed acrostic! cheers thanks
> > >
> > > & drift memory
> > > sounds like me!
> > >
> > > On 20/02/2019 22:45, Sheila Murphy wrote:
> > >> Yes, so good with that acrostic nicely and neatly embedded. Thanks,
> > Doug!
> > >>
> > >> On Wed, Feb 20, 2019 at 2:47 PM Barry Alpert <
> > >> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
> > >>
> > >>> Doug,
> > >>>
> > >>> Gradually discovered the acrostic after noting the unusual 4/5/1/4
> > >>> stanzaic pattern for a sonnet. A very strong "turn" from the end of
> the
> > >>> 10th line to the beginning of the 11th.
> > >>>
> > >>> Barry
> > >>>
> > >>> On Wed, 20 Feb 2019 10:50:32 -0700, Douglas Barbour <
> > [log in to unmask]>
> > >>> wrote:
> > >>>
> > >>>> meet the parents
> > >>>> each time the same
> > >>>> and different
> > >>>> tell that to the kids
> > >>>>
> > >>>> body knows what body feels
> > >>>> loss across the years
> > >>>> ordinary people
> > >>>> or not all learn
> > >>>> dreams will falter
> > >>>>
> > >>>> & drift memory
> > >>>>
> > >>>> batters against stories
> > >>>> organizing what realities
> > >>>> no one can now recall
> > >>>> each time we tell them again
> > >>>>
> >
> > Douglas Barbour
> > [log in to unmask]
> > https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
> >
> > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
> > 2 (UofAPress).
> > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> > Listen. If (UofAPress):
> >
> >
> > It was cold, in a way that Shadow was starting to become familiar with:
> > colder inside the building than out. He wondered how they did that, if it
> > was a British building secret.
> >
> > Neil Gaiman
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