Bill, After a number of readings, I've decided to take the title as the first line in a single-spaced unit with "in dreams and memories". Then double-spacing between units and the current lines 2 & 3 as another unit. A final double-space between stanzas and then your final line. Barry
On Tue, 13 Nov 2018 17:07:42 -0700, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>The question of questions, Bill. A brave one.
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>On Tue, Nov 13, 2018, 4:42 PM Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask] wrote:
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>> In dreams and memories
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>> people seem so preoccupied
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>> going about their business
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>> What’s mine?
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>> bw
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>> 14.11.18
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