Thanks all. More work to do I see but good work. I think I will run, Jill,
with the excision of the final two words, which don’t need spelling out.
Perhaps I can tease out more with the notion of ‘tucked in’ and
horizontality and verticality, Barry and Doug.
Bill
On Thu, 6 Sep 2018 at 2:14 am, Patrick McManus <
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> not X rated dreams either!
>
>
> On 05/09/2018 15:16, Barry Alpert wrote:
> > Bill,
> >
> > Your choice of the word "lawless" struck me, especially having read
> psychological analyses of dream patterning. It did help me to understand
> the first line upon rereading. Are those "truths" vertical?
> >
> > Barry
> >
> > On Wed, 5 Sep 2018 17:33:06 +1000, Bill Wootton <
> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >
> >> Thanks, Patrick. Actually the last linen was the first line that came
> to me. The rest came slowly.
> >>
> >> Bill
> >>
> >>> On 5 Sep 2018, at 5:20 pm, Patrick McManus <
> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> thanks Bill no nightmares I trust!!!! could be a lot of alternative
> last lines P
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> On 04/09/2018 23:40, Bill Wootton wrote:
> >>>> Horizontal lies, tucked-in truths
> >>>>
> >>>> play in your head
> >>>>
> >>>> as you disappear
> >>>>
> >>>> into the lawless cinema of dreams
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> bw
> >>>>
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